Excessive ellipses. Three will do.
Was a great first set.
I was blown away to have Imagine a Picture inturrupted first with a great comedy bit, then a great song!
"interrupted" spelled incorrectly.
Way To go!
"To" should not be capitalized.
Now if the first set did not blow the lead out of those Gap Pants (after groovy Thing), the second set must have.
"Pants" should not be capitalized, while "groovy" should be.
A medely of Mccurdy songs, not songs, but good songs! Ending With "Mobile Home" last verse.
"medley" spelled incorrectly. The second C in McCurdy should be capitalized. "With" should not be capitalized. However, even with these changes, I still wouldn't be able to understand this sentence.
Nice! This show I must say, if you missed it (we know who Luke is) you definetly missed a A++++++++ show.
Again, this sentence makes no sense. Yes, we know who Luke is. What does that have to do with whatever it is you're trying to say here? By the way, "defiantly" is misspelled and it should be "missed AN A++++++++ show."
To hear "Empty (nowhere) Man" was a treat! And by the way, Even with the Mics off, "Heatwave" was still played and sung well! It was a night of great 60's cover tunes
"Even" and "Mics" should not be capitalized. If you must put and apostrophe in "60s" put in front. It never
goes before the S. Also, you're missing a period.
I could kick myself for not bringing the Cam-Corder as planned, but I did spot the Lippert table making Set List notes (yea, they are sick).
"Camcorder" is misspelled, as is "yeah," unless you're at the Ren Fest.
In my first posting about this show there is one metion that must be said-------
"Mention" is misspelled. Far too many dashes here. Three, at the most, will do.
We shall all miss Big Paul as he heads off to Boston to "Res Judicata" their asses, and "duces tecum" Pat-isms to the Legal System there. We shall all miss you Paul! Hopefully you can teach them what it really means to be "Secretly Dainty" on the east coast....
"East Coast" should be capitalized.